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Post by booboobrewer on Oct 5, 2007 17:48:51 GMT -5
I love how you have Kristy harrumphing and Stacey saying "swallow, please" and all those great little details. Too, too funny!
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Post by macca on Oct 5, 2007 18:17:09 GMT -5
I love how you have Kristy harrumphing and Stacey saying "swallow, please" and all those great little details. Too, too funny! ITA! There's all those perfect little BSC touches! (also had to laugh at Mallory clumsily making her way across the room to sit next to Black Jessi... and the "reduced" Chapter Two!) |
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Post by sweetvalleygirl99 on Oct 7, 2007 21:26:03 GMT -5
Hahahahahahahaha, love it!  |
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Post by janey83 on Oct 8, 2007 9:40:16 GMT -5
Wow.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 13, 2007 20:04:14 GMT -5
THE END!!!!!  |
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Post by booboobrewer on Oct 13, 2007 21:00:04 GMT -5
That was gigundoly super! Great job |
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Post by sweetvalleygirl99 on Oct 13, 2007 21:53:01 GMT -5
Yes, great job! I loved the ending! |
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Post by blossom114 on Oct 14, 2007 2:42:40 GMT -5
haha... another one please?? |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 15, 2007 10:49:13 GMT -5
That was so unbelievably accurate, you got the writing style down perfect! I was nearly in tears. Fantastic!
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Post by nothingtolose18 on Feb 1, 2008 0:53:36 GMT -5
Wow, I just read that part that you have on these boards, and its so late here I can't check ff.net for it now. Is it still there? I remember reading some parodies on there - always in awe of people who can write really awesome parodies. From what I just read, that was AWESOME ;D
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Post by sarish on Feb 6, 2008 10:31:54 GMT -5
That was great! Kept me laughing the entire time!
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Post by helsieboo on Feb 6, 2008 11:26:59 GMT -5
Best. fiction. ever.
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Post by bscfan81 on Feb 6, 2008 11:30:18 GMT -5
I loved this story! I know I said that before, but it bears repeating. You captured Claudia's voice so perfectly, and it was just...awesome. :-)
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Post by maryanne13 on Feb 15, 2008 18:25:48 GMT -5
i think it was great...even the title...#754...thats funny!1
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Post by Amalia on Feb 16, 2008 18:24:18 GMT -5
It was totally awesome!!
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