Amalia
Sitting For The Braddocks
Her Original Point of View
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Post by Amalia on Oct 17, 2013 20:11:27 GMT -5
Oh, how an ode to my sweet Mimi and the memories of special tea can set me aghast in tears that makes me perceive how everlasting are the treasures be that are beyond and how lovingly you've shown how sweetness can flee our earthly realm but stay just because you came my way. You were the ray of brightness that came to say how into life's forays can be seen in a way that mimicks a sunnier day. You made homework like a keepsake in the wake of it being used as a tool to mend sisterly days ahead instead of it seen as just a household rule as sweet Janine from mean takes your stead. Now everytime I see a locket, I think of the godsend of your twin. How the unfolding of a memento from a pocket shows me the face of baby Lynn.
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Post by Honeybee on Oct 18, 2013 0:39:20 GMT -5
^That's a lovely poem, you made.
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Amalia
Sitting For The Braddocks
Her Original Point of View
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Post by Amalia on Oct 18, 2013 9:45:43 GMT -5
^ Thanks Buttercup!
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Post by Honeybee on Oct 19, 2013 16:28:44 GMT -5
^Your welcome.
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mallorypike
Sitting For The Papadakis's
If I were thirteen instead of eleven, life would be a picnic...
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Post by mallorypike on Oct 31, 2013 17:07:06 GMT -5
This poem is beautiful. It made me cry (I am such a Mary Anne!) but it also made me smile.
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Amalia
Sitting For The Braddocks
Her Original Point of View
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Post by Amalia on Oct 31, 2013 19:01:45 GMT -5
^ Thanks mallorypike!! I'm glad you liked it!
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